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So you've decided to take the IELTS exam, good for you!
你決定考雅思了，祝賀你！
It's the test for study, work, and life. The IELTS Writing Test is divided into two tasks.
雅思是為了出國學習、工作和生活的語言測試。雅思寫作測試包括兩篇作文。
The first task differs depending on the module you're taking.
第一篇作文的題目要求取決于你報考的雅思考試類型。
There are two IELTS modules: the IELTS Academic Module is generally taken by
雅思考試有兩種類型：一般學術類考試適用于
anyone intending to pursue higher education studies in an English-speaking Institute or country,
想申請去英語語言國家的高校學習的學生；
the IELTS General Training module is generally taken for immigration or employment purposes.
移民或赴外工作的人士則參加培訓類考試。
Here we look at the criteria of task response for Writing Task 1 and task achievement for Writing Task 2.
今天我們將介紹雅思寫作的兩篇作文的評分標準。
These represent one of four criteria on which you will be tested.
先看四大評分標準中的第一個。
Look for the other three criteria in other videos.
其余三個評分標準請看相應視頻。
These criteria focus on the degree to which the exam question has been answered properly.
設定評分標準的目的是評價答案的合理程度。
In the academic module, there is a Writing Task at least 150 words where you should summarize, describe, or explain a table, graph or diagram.
在學術類考試中，作文1會要求你總結、描述、解釋表格或圖表及圖形、字數至少150個詞。
You might be expected to make comparisons, too.
還有可能做比較。
Successfully negotiating this Academic Task 1 means you will need to identify all the key features in the diagram.
為了出色完成學術類作文1，你應當仔細認清圖表中的關鍵信息。
You might lose marks if important details are left out.
如果遺漏了關鍵細節會丟分。
Provide sufficient detail for a meaningful explanation, not too much detail, not too little.
用足夠的細節塑造一個深刻的闡釋，細節不宜太多，也不宜太少。
Insure accuracy when referring to data, or describing trends or processes.
提及數據，描述趨勢或進展時要保證準確。
It's important to write a clear overview.
寫一個清晰的概述非常重要。
This means summarizing the most significant trends or features from the data or information in the diagram.
也就是說要根據圖表中的數據或信息總結出最明顯的趨勢或特點。
This is not simply an introduction to the topic.
僅僅介紹主題是不夠的。
That's a common mistake.
這是一個常見的誤區。
Here's an example of identifying significant trends.
這里有一個分析重要趨勢的例子。
Looking at this graph we would say,
一起來看這個圖表，
from the graph it is apparent that participation of both men and women in full time employment has increased over this time period.
很明顯在圖中的時間段，全職雇傭的男性和女性都有增長。
However while the numbers of women are generally increasing, the numbers of men in part-time employment are fluctuating.
然而兼職工作的女性數量整體呈增長態勢，兼職工作的男性數量卻很波動。
In a question requesting a process description, the overview might identify the key stages in the process,
如果題目要求你描述進展，在概述中就應該點明整個過程的關鍵階段，
for instance how many stages there, and what each are briefly.
比如總共有幾個階段，每個階段簡要來說分別是什么。
In the General Training module there is a letter Writing Task of least 150 words.
培訓類作文1的要求是寫一篇不少于150字的信件。
In this Task, explain the reason for the letter,
答題時應解釋寫信的緣由，
include all the points mentioned in the question and use a consistent and appropriate tone.
覆蓋題目提及的所有要點，并采用連貫和恰當的語氣。
