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寫(xiě)作題目：
2013年4月6日雅思寫(xiě)作Task2真題解析附范文
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
寫(xiě)作題目分析：
【點(diǎn)評(píng)一】
本題是2009年5月21日的話(huà)題，屬于抽象類(lèi)話(huà)題。抽象類(lèi)話(huà)題看似難寫(xiě)，實(shí)際上只要轉(zhuǎn)換成具體話(huà)題就容易手了。進(jìn)步的領(lǐng)域：科技，教育。仍需改進(jìn)的 領(lǐng)域：環(huán)保，犯罪，人口老齡化，動(dòng)物保護(hù)，文化語(yǔ)言保護(hù)。本題幾乎無(wú)所不包，雅思寫(xiě)作題庫(kù)中幾乎所有話(huà)題都能用于本題。
【點(diǎn)評(píng)二】
題目：
Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人認(rèn)為人類(lèi)在各方面已經(jīng)取得了不斷的進(jìn)步，而另外一些人認(rèn)為并非如此。人類(lèi)在哪些領(lǐng)域取得了進(jìn)步？哪些領(lǐng)域沒(méi)有取得發(fā)展？
開(kāi)頭段：
How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中間段1：
回答第一問(wèn)：人類(lèi)在哪些領(lǐng)域取得了進(jìn)步？ 1. 眾所周知，幾個(gè)世紀(jì)以來(lái)，人類(lèi)一直致力于通過(guò)發(fā)展科技來(lái)改善生存環(huán)境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.【論證示范】Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，與過(guò)去相比，人類(lèi)在醫(yī)學(xué)領(lǐng)域取得了許多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中間段2：
回答第二問(wèn)：哪些領(lǐng)域沒(méi)有取得發(fā)展？ 1. 污染，全球變暖，物種滅絕等環(huán)境問(wèn)題已經(jīng)成為很多國(guó)家頭痛的問(wèn)題，它們經(jīng)常會(huì)陷于經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展和生態(tài)平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各個(gè)種族和宗教間的武裝沖突是一個(gè)持續(xù)性的問(wèn)題，這對(duì)世界的和平與和諧造成了威脅。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
結(jié)尾段：
To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
