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首段：爭議焦點 +　個性開篇 + (寫作目的)

Nothing has received　more debate than multiple career choice. Although we may pride ourselves on our reasonable careers, we are no longer free to depend on a single career, for some people become well-educated and cherish big ambition, therefore, fewer people wish to work the same job day in and day out.

翻譯：沒有什么像多元職業選擇一樣引起人們的爭議，我們以自己事業自豪，但是，我們已經不能再依賴一份工作。很多人受到良好教育，胸懷大志，很少有人愿意做一份工作。

點評：本文也可不寫首段尾句：This essay aims to explore the reasons of job-hopping and then discuss its pros and cons. 但是，文無定法。本文的創新是爭議焦點在背景介紹之前。

二段：多元職業的兩個原因的展開：

The reasons of constant job transition are manifold. Here, some of them will be explored. First, young workers are generally attracted by high salary and possible job-promotion and chances of self-improvement in new job opportunities. Further, many enterprises have been experienced economic downturn， thus sliming down isinevitable. Meanwhile, world markets seem to be always fluctuating. Individual cannot expect to have the same job.

翻譯：多元的職業的原因是很多的。現在我將分析一些原因。第一，很多年輕人被新工作帶來的高薪，晉升，成長的機會吸引。第二，企業經歷經濟的低迷，精簡機構不可避免，同時，世界市場變化波動，個人不能期待從事一門工作。

點評：完美的原因的展開：主觀談及客觀。slim down v 精簡機構

三段：利好的展開：

Seen from the positive aspects, a number benefits could be gained via job-hopping. The most glaring merit is thatone could establish well-connected interpersonal relationship, which usually brings about more space for career development. Meanwhile, diverse cultures of different enterprises could be experienced, Another virtue deriving from multiple career choice is that job hoping means a broad range of work and life experience and constant refreshment. Conversely，single career choice sometimes means absenteeism and slack in working. Last，one could acquire various vocational skills, accumulate rich working experience, in this sense, one could embracemore opportunities of success.

翻譯：從積極角度看，多元職業利好很多，最明顯的優點在于人可以建立良好的人脈資源，人脈帶來職業成長的空間。同時，人可以體驗不同企業的多元文化。另外的優點在于多元職業意味著豐富的工作經驗和人生閱歷以及持久的新鮮感，相反，單一職業選擇有時候意味著工作的懈怠和懶惰。最后，多元職業幫助人獲得多元的職業技能，積累豐富人生經驗。因此，職員可以獲得更多成功的機會。

點評：

establish well-connected interpersonal relationship v 建立良好的人脈資源：

diverse cultures of different enterprises could be experienced v 人可體驗不同企業的多元文化

Another virtue deriving from multi-career choice is that 另外一個來自多元職業的利好在于 = further 第二;

means absenteeism and slack in working v 意味著職業的倦怠以及懶散：

acquire various vocational skills v 學習多元的職業技能

embrace more opportunities of success. v 擁抱更多的成功的機會：

savor v 品味……

四段：兩點弊端的展開：

However，problems invariably ensue. Initially, it is also possible that those job-hoppers fall into financial difficulties if skipping between jobs too frequently. Another demerit is that in the eyes of some business owners, the fondness of job switching reflects, to some extent, employees’ disloyalty and lack of dedication to jobs.

翻譯：然而，問題隨著發生。第一，跳槽者可能因為過于頻繁跳槽而陷入經濟困難。第二，在老板眼里，喜歡跳槽在某種程度上反映了他們的不忠誠而且對工作缺乏奉獻精神。

點評：從個人角度以及企業角度談及：

尾段：支持多元職業：

In closing，it is my stand that one of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their favorite careers. However， in the long run, there is something more important than a stable job prospect. Therefore, ambitious and gifted youngsters should be inspired to explore the unknown and constantly surpass themselves. The multi-career option is universally suitable for vast majority of modern people.

翻譯：總之，我認為現代工作方式的特征之一就是人們擇業選擇更加自由，但是，從長期看，有比工作穩定更加重要的考慮因素。因此，雄心勃勃的才華橫溢的年輕人應該探究未知，自我超越。多元職業選擇適合大部分的現代人。

點評：…… should be inspired to explore the unknown and constantly surpass themselves.……應該被鼓勵去探究未知的世界，不斷自我超越(支持極限運動;支持出國留學)：


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