In some countries, children are expected to study long hours both at and after school, therefore, they have little leisure time.
What are the positive and negative effects on the children and society as a whole?

題目解讀

此題目為教育類話題，體裁為議論文下屬的利弊分析類，要分別陳述將大部分時間花在學(xué)習(xí)上對社會和孩子自身的影響。

寫作建議
Introductory Paragraph:
交代background information，
如:Education, especially children's, is undoubtedly of vital importance to a nation's sustained economic development.

再進(jìn)一步導(dǎo)入具體內(nèi)容:In some countries, a broad swath of students spend a huge amount of time working

hard not only at school but after school as well, leading to the fact that they enjoy less leisure time.

Body Paragraph One:
對孩子產(chǎn)生的積極影響:
小孩子可扎實掌握更多深層次知識。
Children can have a thorough grasp of an in-depth knowledge.
對孩子產(chǎn)生的負(fù)面影響:
小孩子花過多時間在學(xué)習(xí)上可能會對成長不利。可舉例說明一下，比如:長時間的sedentary lifestyle令人們擔(dān)憂他們的健康狀況。
The detrimental effects of working long hours on healthy growth are easy to be seen.

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對社會產(chǎn)生的積極影響:營造一種愛學(xué)習(xí)的社會風(fēng)氣，對整個國家的教育發(fā)展起到推動作用。
An atmosphere for study has been created, which in turn has far-reaching consequences for policymakers who

decide what the government's education policies will be.
對社會產(chǎn)生的負(fù)面影響:長時間在學(xué)習(xí)上的專注導(dǎo)致學(xué)生興趣喪失，反過來同樣對教育的發(fā)展起到抑制作用。
Students who are engaging in long-hour study are likely to lose interest, leading to the fact that children's learning isinhibited. Therefore, the education system will be affected to some extent.
在整個論述的過程中，考生可采用舉例論證和因果論證這兩種常見也是最有效的論證方法詳細(xì)展開。

Concluding Paragraph:
長時間學(xué)習(xí)對孩子自身和整個社會利弊皆有，可通過鼓勵孩子在學(xué)習(xí)過程中積極參加更多的課外活動。消除弊端，把孩子朝受益的方向引領(lǐng)。
To conclude, there are both downsides and upsides with regard to the issue that a considerable amount of time is spent by students on study. Only when children are encouraged to participate actively in more extracurricular activities can they enjoy the benefits of working for a long time.