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【引言段】：起段開頭——范圍由寬而窄。起中有合。前呼合段。起段第1-2-3句前呼合段第18-17-16句，次序顛倒。
開頭段三句話
Famous persons deserve no more privacy than do other people for reasons probably better understood by children playing "hide and seek." The real fun of the game lies in not hiding too well and too long so as not to be forgetton eventually. In theory and in real life, this is exactly what is happening to some celebrities who appear as victims at the mercy of the media.
1. 申論主題：考生回答試題的立場(chǎng)就是主題，預(yù)表沖突的抽象化。——State your arguable position on the topic=state your thesis
2. 集中焦點(diǎn)：考生的立場(chǎng)與不是考生的立場(chǎng)的沖突所在就是焦點(diǎn)。——focus your thesis by presenting viewpoints in conflict
3. 一分為二：把焦點(diǎn)分兩道要點(diǎn)，作為承段招牌句A與轉(zhuǎn)段招牌句B。——divide your focus into 2 main ideas [A and B] to be used as topic sentences [signposts] in your 2 body paragraphs
>Body A: follow your focus and support your thesis
【中體A】：承段接頭--從考生的知識(shí)與經(jīng)驗(yàn)里提出[RED]理由[reasons]——例子[examples]——細(xì)節(jié)[details]。RED sentences inform and explain the topic sentence's viewpoint or opinion.
接頭段6句話
First, the game, referring to the media trying to seek famous people who play hiding. Players prefer the excitement of finally being found to the panic of being entirely ignored since exposure to the public eyes and ears is key to achieving popularity. They may pretend to hide but they had better not be too good at the game. This concept is easy to understand, if you know the game. It is about the experience of the delicious thrill of hiding while others come looking for you, and about the delicious terror of being discovered. What an unspeakable panic there is when, after a long and futile search, the others abandon you?
4. 招牌句A：來龍自起段第三句的一分為二。去脈到合段第一句的二合為一。——Write a topic sentence that states the viewpoint for your first body paragraph.
5. RED——理由
6. RED——例子
7. RED——細(xì)節(jié)
8. RED——例子
9. RED——細(xì)節(jié)
>Body B: follow your focus and support your thesis
【中體B】：轉(zhuǎn)段轉(zhuǎn)頭--從考生的知識(shí)與經(jīng)驗(yàn)里提出[RED]理由[reasons]——例子[examples]——細(xì)節(jié)[details]。RED sentences inform and explain the topic sentence's viewpoint or opinion.
轉(zhuǎn)頭段6句話
The game applies to quite a few celebrities in entertainment and sports sectors in real life. Look at them who work very hard to become well-known, then wear dark glasses as if to avoid being recognized. This means that discovery could not be possible without their willingly having left road signs. No doubt, they need the media to boost their fame or even infamy, enabling them to be sighted more often and in more places. Knowing no clear line between fame and infamy, they make breaking news side by side with global headlines. Although some stories are not meant to be told, actually there are pop and movie stars in particular who feel no need to hide such scandals as hasty marriages and divorces, luxury and extravagance, romance and sex, drugs and drunk driving, and what not.
10. 招牌句B：來龍自起段第三句的一分為二。去脈到合段第一句的二合為一。——Write a topic sentence that states the viewpoint for your second body paragraph.
11. RED——理由
12. RED——例子
13. RED——細(xì)節(jié)
14. RED——例子
15. RED——細(xì)節(jié)
>Conclusion: from specific to general
【結(jié)尾段】：合段回頭——范圍由窄而寬。合中有起。后應(yīng)起段。合段第16-17-18句后應(yīng)起段第3-2-1句，次序顛倒。
回頭段3句話
Whether in theory or in practice, famous people will pay the price for their fame or infamy and pretend to hide from paparazzi who try to invade into their privacy. Journalists in general are therefore not to blame for giving information about the private lives of famous persons to a gossip world. Ordinary housewives and family men do not need to worry about the possibility of being crucified by the media outlets.
16. 二合為一：回頭結(jié)合招牌句A+招牌句B。——You should refer back to your focus about conflictive viewpoints A+B.
17. 還原焦點(diǎn)：立場(chǎng)的抽象沖突回頭到焦點(diǎn)。——You should widen your focus to the scope of your thesis.
18. 重申主題：再度回頭重述主題。——Don't only restate your thesis but show the significance of your synthesis of the information.
