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Coherence是雅思大作文的評分標準之一，即文章的連貫性。連貫的語言可以使文章讀起來如行云流水，給人一氣呵成之感。但是，在寫作時，很多考生比較缺乏文章連貫的意識，或缺少使得語言表達連貫的方法，導致雅思大作文失分。鑒于此，專家將結合多年的考試及教學經驗，給雅思考生們講解一下如何增強段落內部的連貫性。
一、正確使用指代詞
使用的指代詞包括人稱代詞，物主代詞和一些特定的詞語。
★使用人稱代詞或物主代詞代替文章中重復出現的詞
劍橋4 test4 task2范文中的句子：
But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling theirchildren. If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit.
★使用特定的詞語來指代某一類事物
這些詞包括one, that, those, so, this, not和do的各種形式。同時，被替代的可以是名詞、動詞，也可以是句子。
①替代名詞(用one, that, those來替代某個名詞)
劍橋7 test B task2范文中的句子：
I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid. However, it is also true that it is onlythose who reach the very top of their profession who can get these huge salary.
②替代動詞(用do的各種形式來代替前面提到的動詞)
劍橋4 test4 task2范文中的句子：
When they get to school age they have not learnt any self control or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did.
③替代句子(用so, this, 或者not來替代一個句子)
劍橋4 test4 task2范文中的句子：
Of course, factors such as loving relationships, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too. But this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy.
