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第二篇RS（即原因+解決方案的題型）例題2010年1月23日
第一段（開頭）
In our time and age, much debate has taken place about social equality. The disparity between the wealthy and the impoverished is being enlarged. In this article, I intend to explore its sources and provide some possible measures.
第二段（分析原因）
本段內(nèi)容概要：社會(huì)資源分配不均，社會(huì)保障/福利系統(tǒng)不完善，家庭背景不同
The primary cause of this problem is that social resources are allocated unevenly among citizens. Furthermore, public welfare system fails to cover those disadvantaged groups in reality. Another contributing factor is that individuals’ income is always determined by their capabilities. Finally, people’s success is also directly related to one’s family background.
第三段（解決方案）
本段內(nèi)容概要：富人應(yīng)該幫助窮人擺脫貧困，向富人征更多的稅，完善社會(huì)福利體系/給弱勢(shì)群體更多的支持，大力推動(dòng)慈善事業(yè)
In order to address this problem, I believe we should foster the development of charity organizations and conduct more fund-raising activities. It is also necessary for us tolevy higher taxes from the wealthy. Another positive step would be to provide disadvantaged groups with more support such as free education and medical care.Besides, the haves are encouraged to help the poor get rid of poverty.
第四段（結(jié)尾）
For the sake of social solidarity, it is vital that we take more measures to bridge the disparity between the rich and the poor. If this problem fails to be solved properly, a large number of crisis and dangers will emerge.
