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II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.
上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現(xiàn)就展出場所(博物館還是社區(qū)圖書館)征集公眾意見，假設(shè)你是王敏，給上海博物館寫一封信表達(dá)你的想法。你的信必須滿足以下要求：
1. 簡述你寫信的目的及你對場所的選擇;
2. 說明你的理由(從便利性，專業(yè)性等方面對這兩個場所進(jìn)行對比)
【點(diǎn)評解析】
今年英語作文話題貼近生活，考生應(yīng)該有話可說，但要寫好，不僅要有一定的語言功底，還需要對博物館和社區(qū)圖書館有所了解，否則話語會比較表面化。這樣的命題對英語教學(xué)有較好的導(dǎo)向作用，即學(xué)校和家庭要努力提供機(jī)會讓孩子走出課堂，走向社會。
如何寫&整體框架:
考生認(rèn)真審題后，作文時開章明義，用一句主題句明確自己的選擇(如選擇社區(qū)圖書館或博物館)，然后另起兩段分別就便利性和專業(yè)性進(jìn)行比較，筆墨應(yīng)重點(diǎn)放在你所選擇的地點(diǎn)的優(yōu)勢方面，結(jié)尾部分稍作總結(jié)，呼應(yīng)開頭的選擇。
【作文范文】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum will hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re responsible for collecting public suggestions about the best location to hold it. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions. As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonable to hold thepainting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.
On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city. Visitors can go there by subway,by bus and so on. What’s more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environmentto appreciate the famous paintings.
On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum both at home and abroad, is more professional in holding paintingexhibitions. What’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.
Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.
Yours,
Wang Min
n. 安全，防護(hù)措施，保證，抵押，債券，證券
