「要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟」
在英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)的提示信息中，常有這樣的語(yǔ)句“可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)”或“可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮”，但所增加的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該與文章相關(guān)。如果所“發(fā)揮”的內(nèi)容與文章無關(guān) ，就是“畫蛇添足”了。

「信息提示」

根據(jù)下面的4幅圖畫用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，要求故事包括所有圖畫的主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使 意思連貫。詞數(shù)在100以上。

「習(xí)作實(shí)況」

One day， an old woman was crossing the street with a basket in her hand. She went to do some shopping. Just then a car came up and she was knocked down onto the ground. She was badly injured and couldn‘t move. But to everyone’s anger, the car ran away as quickly as it could . The old woman had to lie on the ground and cried （1）。 Luckily， a man， who was swee ping the street nearby， saw this. He ran quickly up to her and helped her stand up. He was angry with the driver （2）。 Then he took her to the nearest hospital. There a doctor examined her care fully and gave her some medical care. After that， the dustman took her home. When the old woman‘s daughter knew what had happened to her mother， she was moved deeply and thanke d him very much. Aft er a while the dustm an left and went to do his work. The daughter thanked him again ( （3）。

「精講點(diǎn)撥」

(1)此句與圖中提示不相符，應(yīng)刪去。
(2)此處加寫這句屬多余，也與圖畫內(nèi)容不符。
(3)文章寫到“……very much.”處已經(jīng)很完整了，加上這一句使行文顯得重復(fù)、累贅。
「精品范文」

One day， an old woman was crossing the street with a basket in her hand. She went to do some shopping. Just then a car came up and she was knocked down onto the ground. She was badly injured and couldn‘t move a little. Luckily，a man，who was sweeping the street nearby， saw this. He ran quickly up to her and helped her stand up. Then he took her to the nearest hospital. There a doctor examined her carefully and gave her some medical care. Af ter that， the dustman took her home. When the old woman’s daughter kne w what had happened to her mother，she was moved deeply and thanked him very much.