參考范文：
　　My View on Helping Others in Need
　　In modern society we are often sorry to see that people are reluctant to help others out, not to mention helping a stranger; offering a helping hand seems to be out of accord with the times.
　　Then what’s wrong with our society? Some people may say that facing skyrocketinghousing prices, expensive medical expenditure and soaring commodity prices, they have no choice but to struggle to make a living, and thus it would be impossible to spare a hand to help others because it may bring them into trouble. Therefore, standing by indifferently is their only choice.
　　However, is it necessary to be selfish in order to survive, or in order to ensure that people do not take advantage of you? In my opinion, helping others brings a strong sense of accomplishment. What’s more, the evaluation criteria for judging one individual’s success should be modified so that offering a helping hand to people in need is encouraged and welcomed in our society all the time.

　　寫作點評：
　　本題是寫作中常見的現(xiàn)象分析及觀點闡釋性作文，正確運用表示原因、結(jié)果的句式，采用一定的論證方法，如舉例、名言警句等，條理清晰、語義邏輯準(zhǔn)確且鮮明的表達出個人的觀點是該題奪取高分的保證。