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（一）諺語(yǔ)警句型/引語(yǔ)評(píng)論型
1. Misfortunes Bring Out One’s Best Qualities
（該題屬于典型的“諺語(yǔ)警句型”）
（解釋含義）An inspiring saying goes that “misfortunes bring out one’s best qualities”. Simple as the saying is, its meaning is profound and thought-provoking. Evidently, it is meant to tell us that unfavorable conditions can stimulate one’s will to fight and give full play to his talents, and that we should not be indulged in depression after we have met setbacks.
（舉例說(shuō)明之外國(guó)歷史事例）Actually, history abounds with examples to prove this saying. Here I can think of no better illustration of the proverb than the experience of Thomas Carlyle, a famous English historian. His manuscript of “The History of French Revolution” was accidently burnt by the careless housekeeper of his close friend just after he finished writing it. Instead of blaming his friend, the historian comforted him by saying that the destroyed one was not his best version. Then he rewrote the book and indeed made it a much better one.
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（舉例說(shuō)明之中國(guó)歷史事例）Actually, history abounds with examples to prove this saying. Here I can think of no better illustration of the proverb than the experience of Confucius, the earliest and greatest educator in Chinese history. He completed his famous work Spring and Autumn only after he met a series of setbacks and experienced bitterness of life. Another case in point might be Hua Yanjun, or Abing, the well-known folk musician in recent China. As a blind man, he lived at the lowest level of the society before liberation. But it might just be his sufferings that had brought out his best qualities as a musician and enabled him to create the most reputable melody, his masterpiece The Moon in Two Springs.
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（舉例說(shuō)明之個(gè)人經(jīng)歷）Actually, history abounds with examples to prove this saying. Taking a look around, we can also find examples too many to enumerate. Here I can think of no better illustration of the proverb than the experience of my own. Though performing well enough in the college entrance exam, I was only provided with the opportunity to enroll in a second-class university. However, I did not lose my heart. Instead, I found the remoteness and quietness of the campus a favorable condition for my study. In terms of English, I have passed CET-4 with a high score. Now I believe I can do the same with my CET-6.
（我的做法）Bringing what has been discussed into a conclusion, we may say that a curse can also turn into a blessing. Personally, I will not indulge myself in bitterness and complaint after meeting setbacks. What I will do is to seek opportunities and turn adversities into favorable conditions. In a word, I truly agree with the proverb given in the directions and will take the right actions in my life and work in the future.
2. Control Weight and Keep Fit
（該題屬于“引語(yǔ)評(píng)論型”與“解決問(wèn)題型”相結(jié)合的出題方式）
（描述現(xiàn)象）The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of people gaining weight while becoming unhealthy.（舉例論證） Taking a look around, one can find examples too many to enumerate. Just as the saying goes, “while the weight of many people is increasing, their level of their health is decreasing.”
（分析原因）A number of factors can account for the phenomenon, but the following might be the critical ones. In the first place, there exist faults with those people’s diet. In other words, they do not eat healthy food or they do not eat in the healthy way. In the second place, lack of exercise is also responsible for the phenomenon. Due to the fast pace of modern life, many people’s exercise is far from adequate. Lastly, there exist reasons on the part of those people’s psychology. As a result of the fierce competition in current society, many people have lost the balance in their state of mind, which in turn gives rise to physical and mental problems.
（我的做法）Personally, I will take measures in the three aspects mentioned above to control my weight and keep fit. For one thing, I shall foster the good habit of diet. For another, I shall work out regularly. Last but not least, I will try reading or traveling to achieve a balance in my state of mind. In a word, I truly agree with the proverb given in the directions and will take the right actions in my life in the future.
（如果題目要求提出建議則按如下寫法）
（提出建議）This phenomenon is definitely unhealthy and requires remedying. Naturally, measures should be taken in the three aspects mentioned above. For one thing, it is imperative that people foster the good habit of diet. For another, they need work out regularly. Last but not least, they can try reading or traveling to achieve a balance in their state of mind. Only with these measures taken can we expect a solution of the problem.
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（提出建議）In view of the seriousness of the situation, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. First, it is essential that people foster the good habit of diet. Second, it is suggested that they work out regularly. Then, it is advisable for them to try reading or traveling to achieve a balance in their state of mind. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem will be solved in the near future.
3. Get Truly Educated
（該題屬于“引語(yǔ)評(píng)論型”與“觀點(diǎn)認(rèn)同型”相結(jié)合的出題方式）
（我的觀點(diǎn)）I fundamentally agree with the saying that students must take courses outside their major field of study to become "truly educated." Nevertheless, I would caution that going too far in this direction might be risky.
（我的論據(jù)）The primary reason why I agree with the proposition is that "true" education amounts to far more than gaining the knowledge and ability to excel in one's major course of study and in one's professional career. True education also facilitates an understanding of one-self, and tolerance and respect for the viewpoints of others. Secondly, even the mastery of a specific area requires some knowledge about a variety of others. For example, a political-science student can fully understand that field only by understanding the various psychological, sociological, and historical forces that shape political ideology.
(讓步/指出弊端)Nevertheless, in the pursuit of true education students must be careful not to overextend themselves. Otherwise, he would lack enough knowledge or experience in any single area to have anything valuable to offer.
（我的做法）Personally, I will try to expose myself to more fields of knowledge than my own major: computer science. For instance, I will learn more about English and teaching, for I am determined to take a job of programming in English teaching. Besides, I will learn more about fine art and music. In a word, I truly agree with the saying given in the directions and will take the right actions in my life in the future.
4．All Roads Lead to Rome
（同上）
（描述現(xiàn)象）The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of people taking jobs outside what they learn in college.（舉例論證） Taking a look around, one can find examples too many to enumerate. A case in point might be the Peking University graduates selling pork, or the Xi’an Jiaotong University graduates who sell Chinese hamburgers.（引語(yǔ)觀點(diǎn)）Some approve of this phenomenon and claim that one does not have to work in the field that he majors in during college. （我的觀點(diǎn)）Personally, I agree with them and my reasons are as follow.
（我的論據(jù)）In the first place, one might only find what he is really interested in after studies in college. Therefore, it is nothing worth blame if he engages himself in a career of a different field after finding that he is not keen on what he learns in college. In the second place, the most important thing that one learns in college should not be the professional knowledge itself; rather, it should be the ability to acquire knowledge or to conduct work. Therefore, it does not matter if the job is closely related to what he learns as a major.
（我的做法）Personally, I am a computer major. But I did not choose to learn about computer by myself. It was my parents’ decision. After years of study, I find that I am neither talented nor interested in the major. Meanwhile, I have fostered profound interest in English and have spent a considerable amount of time on it. Therefore, I will choose a job related to English in the future, such as an interpreter or an English teacher.
5．Classroom Teaching Will Go on
（同上）
（描述現(xiàn)象）The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of people receive e-education, or Internet-based teaching.（舉例論證） Taking a look around, one can find examples too many to enumerate. A case in point might be the soaring popularity of YY and MOOC (Massive Open Online Courses).（引語(yǔ)觀點(diǎn)）Some approve of this phenomenon and claim that online teaching will take the place of classroom teaching.（我的觀點(diǎn)）Personally, I disagree with them. Though online teaching has some advantages, it will not totally substitute traditional instruction.
(讓步)\Admittedly, e-education has some merits as compared with traditional teaching. Firstly, it is more economical, in that once a course is prepared, it can be used by large numbers of students. Secondly, it is more convenient. Instead of having to attend classes at fixed times and places, students are free to study when they choose and progress at their own pace. Furthermore, by studying from home there is no need to travel to the college or university, saving both time and money.
（反駁 + 我的論據(jù)）Despite the considerations mentioned above, classroom learning shows no signs of being replaced by e-learning. It seems that face-to-face contact with a teacher is still widely regarded as the best way for students to make progress. Not only the personal contact with a teacher, but also the support and encouragement gained from being part of a class may be one reason for this. Membership of a group may also create a useful spirit of competition, which stimulates learning.
（總結(jié)）To sum up, there may be a role for Internet-based courses to supplement teacher-taught ones, the former cannot replace the latter.
