題目：The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication

要求：By commenting on "Dad：Hi sweetie, how was school, today? Daughter: You can read all about it on my blog, Dad."

得分要點提示：

根據去年官方的評分標準解釋：該作文類型既考表達，又考理解。即：1）The impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication；2）對于對話的評論："Dad：Hi sweetie, how was school, today? Daughter: You can read all about it on my blog, Dad."

如果只寫網絡對于人際交流的影響，而沒有提到要求評論內容的評論。作文評分時，會受到很到影響。

范文（雙語）：

In contemporary society, our life is filled with a variety of anecdotes or stories, and the following is no exception: "Dad：Hi sweetie, how was school, today? Daughter: You can read all about it on my blog, Dad." This conversation can be naturally associated with the impacts of Internet on our life: In an era of Internet, the time for interpersonal communication is impaired by online chats or blogs.

當今社會，生活中有很多軼事或故事，下面的對話便是其中之一：“爸爸：‘親愛的，今天上學怎么樣？’女兒：‘都在博客上，自己看吧！老爸。’ ”。該對話使我們很自然的聯想到了網絡對人際交流的影響：在網絡的時代，人際交流的時間受到網絡聊天或博客影響了。

Apparently, the impacts of the Internet on interpersonal communication are diverse. For one thing, as a vital invention, Internet brings great convenience to our communication, eliminates the barrier of distance, and helps humans to keep in touch wherever and whenever. For another, it is Internet that does not enables family members, friends or classmates to communicate more in a face—to—face way. One case in point is that youngsters may spend hours chatting with acquaintances through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face. Unfortunately, it we let this trend to continue as it is, the interpersonal relationship will, definitely, become alienated or indifferent.

顯然，網絡對于人際交流是多方面的。一方面，作為一個重要發明，網絡給我們的交流帶來巨大便利，消除了我們交流的距離障礙，也幫助人們能夠隨時隨地的聯系。另一方面，正是網絡沒有使得人們與家人、朋友或同學面對面交流更多。一個典型的例子是年輕人可能花好幾個小時上QQ或MSN與熟人熱聊，但很少與他們面對面談話。不幸的是，如果我們讓這種趨勢繼續下去，人際關系將必然變得疏遠。

To my understanding, it is advisable for people to communicate more with their families, friends and acquaintances in real life instead of merely through the Internet. Do bear in mind: Internet is just a tool. （213words）

在我看來，人們最好能夠多與家人，友人和熟人多些現實生活交流，而不是網絡交流。記住：網絡，只是工具而已。