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A Letter of Application
1. 表達自己對該工作的渴求態度
2. 盡量展示自己的技能和經歷
3. 信中應包括自己的聯系方式
【范文】
January , 2010
Dear Sirs,
I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of assistant manager which you advertised in yesterday's China Daily for, as is indicated in the enclosed resume, my major and experiences closely parallel your requirement.
I have always been a top student in my specialized area, biochemistry. I took several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them due to my hard work. I am sure such courses as British and American literature and culture, business management and statistics will lend me an edge in the fierce competition in the job market. Another point I want to draw your attention to is that I have been taking an active part in a variety of campus activities. In the due process teamwork spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skills improved.
I would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss the possibility of working with your company. Or, if you are too busy these days, you can contact me at 64543575 for further information. Thank you for your favorable consideration.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Jenny Green
【點評】
這篇文章是一篇非常成功的求職信。首段表明了自己對經理助理這一職位的渴望，其中包括了自己如何得知這一職位的，而后說明自己的條件符合要求，引起下段。次段分五句，說明自己在專業上是個尖子生，并指出對于其他課程自己做得同樣出色，為將來的工作奠定了堅實的基礎;后兩句說明自己參加了各種學校活動，培養了多方面的能力。第三段首句說明自己非常希望能早日獲得面試的機會;次句說如果對方太忙，可以打電話聯系;末句對對方表示感謝，是一句客套話。
首段中的keen表示“熱切的”， parallel這里做動詞，表示“與……相當，比得上”。第二段首句中的specialized area表示“專業領域”;第二句中的excel是不及物動詞，表示“突出，超常，勝過他人”;第三句中的edge表示“優勢”;第四句中的a variety of等于various,表示“多種多樣的”;第五句中的teamwork spirit表示“團隊精神”，interpersonal skills表示“人際交往的能力”。
