第一段:稱呼
Dear Mr. President,
第二段:引出寫信的目的
主題句: This letter comes to you from ____.
擴(kuò)展句: In it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.
第三段:對(duì)學(xué)校食堂正面的看法
主題句:As you know, _____ . But unfortunately, ______.
擴(kuò)展句:1、___. (舉例) As a result, _____.
2、Besides, ______.
3、And what's more, _____.
第四段:對(duì)學(xué)校食堂負(fù)面的看法
主題句:Some people may argue that ____.
擴(kuò)展句:1、For instance, ____ and ____.
2、But in my opinon, ______.
第五段:結(jié)尾,表明自己看法
結(jié)尾句:To be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with _____.
擴(kuò)展句:I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. Thanks. Li Ming