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范文. My View on Fate
There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate. Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life.
注：1. consensus 相同意見
2. 第一句話可以套用，如范文18：There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth.
3. while 輕微轉(zhuǎn)折和對比，強(qiáng)轉(zhuǎn)折用詞but, however 4. master 主人
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. There is a saying, “Everyone is the architect of his own future.” Which means one’s fate is decided in his own hands. In fact, no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life. Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just can’t realize how much inner strength and ability they have. We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us successful and happy.
注：1. 第一句as far as與I agree重復(fù)，把后半句改為the latter opinion seems more reasonable。
2. architect 建筑師，archor 弓箭手
3. In fact 前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，之前從正面闡述，之后從反面闡述
