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保證不跑題是寫作當(dāng)中第一重要任務(wù)，第二個重要任務(wù)就是條理清楚。對于議論文來說，正反面要清楚。對于說明文來說，1、2、3條要清楚，對于描述文要來，誰干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good Health來說，第一段保持正反面要清楚就應(yīng)這樣寫：主題句（It is very important to have good health.,正面（With good health, we can...）,反面(Without good health, we can do nothing. We can’t do...)?
第二段應(yīng)當(dāng)這樣寫：主題句（There are four ways to keep fit.） 從幾方面說明： Firstly, we should have our breakfast in the morning. Second, we should have a nap at noon. Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon. And fourth, we could have a )等副詞，他們可以使文章的條理性十分突出。作文是主觀性題，要想得高分我們必須把評卷老師考慮進(jìn)去。評卷老師的時間很短（每份卷子的作文只有一兩分鐘就要閱完），所以我們在列條條時最好不用：To begin with, ... After that,... And then,... The next,... The following,... At last ...。因?yàn)橛眠@樣的詞語不利于閱卷老師看出你作文的條理性。?
第三段應(yīng)當(dāng)這樣寫：主題句（My own practices are the following.）具體情況（主語為第一人稱代詞I，與第二段呼應(yīng)） In the morning, I have my breakfast . At noon, I have a nap. And in the afternoon, I always play football. In the evening, I usually listen to the classic music.?
綜上所述，如果我們按以上幾節(jié)的方法去做，就可以保證及格以上分?jǐn)?shù)。
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