評論
打印
- 將提示的第一句和第二句合為第一段，于段尾提出自己的觀點；
- 說明自己的理由；
- 結論段總結全文
例文
標題：How to Achieve Success
提綱：
1)有人說成功主要靠運氣；
2)有人則認為成功主要靠勤奮，與運氣毫無關系;
3)我的觀點
Some people say the key to success is the luck, while others claim it is hard work. As far as I am concerned, there are many factors contributing to success and the three fundamental ones are diligence, devotion and perseverance.
Diligence is the first key factor to success. Diligence helps us remove ignorance, overcome difficulties, and enlighten our minds. It makes a fool wise, and a poor man rich. Devotion is another factor to success. Whatever we do, we must love it and do it whole-heartedly. Only when we set our minds on the job, can we do it well. Furthermore, perseverance, or a strong will, is the last key to success. Without a strong will, we are likely to give up when we meet some difficulties, let alone perform wonderful deeds.
To conclude, all great men achieve success through diligence, devotion and perseverance. Just as the famous saying goes, 'No pains, no gains', 'Where there is a will, there is a way.'
