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Thunderous growls from angry storm clouds shook the world around me, accompanied by illuminated streaks of lightning that forcefully struck and destroyed everything.
本句描寫非常生動(dòng).句子采用了移就的修辭手段.它的用法是將本該用來(lái)修飾某一類名詞的修飾語(yǔ)用來(lái)修飾另一類名字.在本句中,angry本來(lái)是應(yīng)該修飾人的,這里卻用來(lái)修飾云層,這樣的修飾手段讓人感覺(jué)文章形象生動(dòng)而不呆板,具有強(qiáng)烈的感染力.
The one I know I can always count on forever, the one I know that will never leave me in times of adversity and the one that loves me with all her heart.
此句中,作者采用三個(gè)均以the one開(kāi)頭倒裝的并列結(jié)構(gòu),同時(shí)運(yùn)用了漸進(jìn)的寫作方法,行文一氣呵成,文章的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)力度得以增強(qiáng).
